Thursday, November 11, 2010

Dear future federal prisoner...

Today, I received a wonderful comment from a skinheadlet on an old post, a white supremacist poetry slam, which I repost here:

Whomever "corrected" this poem did not go to college as I am in high school and the poetic techniques that the true author of this poem writes are put their for emphasis. Capitalizing certain words etc are poetic techniques. 1488
Ah, from the mouths of babes comes...well, now that I think about it, mostly drool and vomit. Yep. This comes from the mouth of a babe.

Your first word is wrong, as it is the subject of the sentence. Your second word, corrected, is simply inaccurate. Why would I, who finds everything that the poem stands for pathetic and execrable (look it up, junior), "correct" it? I judged it and found it wanting. Need I go on? You write like a promising drop out, and if your parents only could have afforded the abortion, we wouldn't need to have this conversation.

Listen, don't embarrass yourself or your family by trying to go to college. Save your money, start a meth lab, and sleep with your sister one night when you are both high. This is really all anyone expects of you.

HJ

2 comments:

uzza said...

Now that's poetry!

Don said...

Seems a bit harsh; his sister might not be anything like him.